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Hairy Passion On The Loose!

Hand in hand they walked

clasping fingers, fears and furore –

each step,

a leap towards a drowning dream;

each glance,

a gnawing pain within.

feet on sand

The sand grains

tickling their naked soles

surging sensations, soaring

in their clothed bodies;

dusk beckoning them

into her seducing arms of comfort.

nail palm 

He looked at her-

intense his gaze

faltering, dazed

she clutched his palm,

nails hurting his nude flesh

setting on fire passion locked within.

waves

Rising waves of love

enveloping body and soul

twisting, turning, arousing nerves

flaring thoughts fusing

with overpowering emotion;

the setting sun consummating their frenzied desire.

on beach 

Exhausted, satiated, they slumbered

till the piercing rays of morn

washed their glowing bodies;

it was then he noticed the black hairy shadows of a passionate night

and wishfully wondered,

‘ I wish she had opted for her hair removal.’

gillette-satin-care-contest

“Don’t let him ever ponder again.

Let his love ‘gently glide over’ you

again and again

leaving behind

the ‘smooth satin radiance’

of divine perfection!

 This post is a part of the Gillette Satin Care contest in association with BlogAdda.com

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11 Comments

  1. A very suitable poem for the Gillette advertisement!

  2. Quite apt for the contest, good!

    • Thanks Mridula. Glad you liked the piece of verse….

      • 🙂
        If possible, plz read my small work Final Destination

  3. I like the way you cleverly manipulated the lines to the apt ending 🙂 Good work!

    • Hi Ashwathy,
      Nice you liked it! Thanks for the compliment and for dropping by:)

  4. Mridula, will definitely read your work and get back.

  5. Enjoyed reading it..well crafted.

  6. Very beautiful and very creatively woven into the poem Shail!

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