…..They came trotting by, man and stallion, in style and stood captured in time. Before them stood a woman from another generation, from another world and oh! were they intrigued.
“Who are you, woman?” the ravishing man with the stubble beard asked.
“You look parched. This ain’t your kinda place, is it?”
The beautiful brown glowing horse neighed in unison as if agreeing with his master and companion of years.
The woman looked bewildered. Here she was, away timeless in the desert sand, thirsty for not just water but for the love she had always wanted but somehow never got. All that was left inside of her was a heart cracked and hurt by lovers who betrayed her when she had asked for more than mere lust. And here stood a man, tall and handsome wanting to know whether she wanted something? No one had ever asked her ever. It was she who had been trailing love and had eventually been lost in the ravages of cruel time.
The cowboy gave his rough hand, put it around her slender waist oh! so gently and she landed right before him on the stallion, too scared that this beautiful moment would vanish even before she could marinate in its cozy warmth…..
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The cowboy gave his rough hand, put it around her slender waist oh! so gently and she landed right before him on the stallion, too scared that this beautiful moment would vanish even before she could marinate in its cozy warmth…..
love your descriptive words, a beautifully crafted tale.
well done.
🙂
An entirely other world charm…short and sweet.
Wow! Heavenly. 🙂 Didn’t know you were so good with romance. I often find it the most difficult genre. Loved reading it.
Dear Jingle,
I love this whole concept of creating a very very short story with a picture as a prompt. It is much more challenging than poetry with a picture prompt. Glad you liked it…
Dear Shernaz,
Glad you liked it. Going to come up with some more of these…
Dear Smita,
Oh! So very sweet of you to say so. Didn’t know myself…. about writing romance short and sweet although I have written longer stories on it..
It has a cosy , romantic , feel-good quality !
He swept her off her feet ~ both literally and figuratively !
Aah! the begining of a romance and it ended too soon. I appreciate your ability to write so descriptively of a scene that it keeps the reader wanting more.Good job.
Nice interpretation of the pic 🙂
Wowo.. and you wrote a story from jsut a picture amazing ..
John Wayne would have approved :).
Thanks for stopping by my blog!
Hi Butterflies,
Thanks so much. Thought I’d try something new. Have been writing short stories but not sooooooo short. Glad you liked it.
Hi Sapna,
Glad you found the interpretation interesting..
Hi Bikram,
Thanks. Just an attempt. It feels good that you liked it…
Hi Hema,
Thanks for the lovely appreciation..
enjoyed the flow… sensitive writing …
Dear Alokha,
So very nice to hear from you. Thanks. Glad you liked the write-up…
That’s a lot of imagination to write from that one single pic!! 🙂
Hi Ashwathy,
You liked it? Good to hear that. Maybe, I can begin writing the novel I had always planned writing but postponed….
Wow…what a vivid description, i could visualize every written word…
how did u manage this story with just one visual clue…
it’s beautiful
Dear Prerna,
Thanks. Nice you liked the tiny story. Just let my imagine soar….
🙂 – – This is what I have been trying too with some rules on the number of words to be used. I love the fact that I am forced to say something within limits. It is surely fun but I can not do this so easily as you have done Shail! Nice try, if this was your first. I am such a bad story teller :-(.
Dear Shree,
Thanks. Nice to see you here. Yes indeed, this is my first attempt at writing a story using a picture as prompt. I have written bigger stories but not such tiny ones and that too being dictated by a picture…
I like the character development in this. You could turn it into a novel. 🙂
ah…the moment! you captured it beautifully, Shail. Romance is my genre and I loved it. John Wayne is awesome too!
Hi Angela,
So nice of you. I am glad you liked the story. As far as turning it into a novel is concerned, your comment is encouraging. Maybe, I should start the novel which is pending in the attic of my mind….
Dear Hope,
You liked it? So nice. Since romance is your genre as you mention, that you find the short story interesting is a good pat on the back for me.
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Very romantic!
Many a woman has looked at a picture of John Wayne, and dreamed of being carried off into the sunset with him, but few have been able to put it into words as you have!
— K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
Thanks dear Geeta. Glad you liked it…
Dear Kay,
Thanks. That is a lovely appreciation of a small attempt. Very encouraging….
Lovely! Sometimes we can fall in love at first sight! Your writing flows beautifully.
Thanks for visiting me and the lovely comment.
Hi Day Dreamer,
Thanks for your lovely comment too. Lets keep in touch.
He swept her off her feet ~ in the literal and figurative sense of the word !
vote for it if you like it.
my friend’s blog.
Hi Vikram. I have read your friend’s blog and voted for it too…
Hi Mish,
Thanks for your lovely comment…
Hi Samsung,
Thanks for stopping by and enjoying the write-ups.
Beautiful and romantic take on the prompt =)
Hi MindLoveMisery,
Glad you liked my take on the prompt. Hope to see more of you here….
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